Friday, November 13, 2009

Looking at the people dying




This is the most bloody seen that the woods have ever seen
The woods would think that this is so bad
This should not be happening to our people
This is not what they should be going through

This is hard to listen to
Everything is happening to fast
The sounds of the hornets are very loud
It sounds like a big huge bomb

It smells like a skunk sprayed somebody
It smells like a dog done did number 2
It smells like they have been sitting here for some years
I do not like this smell

People are getting killed
Something you do not want to look at
Something you could not stand looking at
It is sad to look at something like this

I think this a bad thing to look at
The people do not deserve to die like this
This war should not have taken place at all
The people should feel bad about everything they did

1 comment:

  1. Good post. Your use of slang fit perfectly. You made me laugh with the dog doing #2 reference.

    Met all the criteria. 30/30 points

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